Editor
As the editor i think there is a lot of space for improvement. Overall I think that the video as a whole was stitched together and presented alright, the b-roll work well with the narration however were sometimes irrelevant, the interview was understandable. The transitions were a little sloppy and were not properly timed therefore did not change clips fast enough giving the full message of each clip, the audio fade in and out of each clip was also too long and missed out some important parts. The color of the credits title was not bold enough because the background had the same color. The introduction section (IS DOCUMENTARY CHANNEL & MANDARIN OUTBURST IN HONG KONG) was very good because it was very eye-catchy and gave a good interesting tone to the video however it quickly died out especially with the interviews taking too long.
To improve on the final outcome next time I will need more b-roll and also more on topic b-rolls to fit in with the narration. I also think that the narration should also include video instead of just sound for a better feel of who is actually talking. The transitions could have been chosen more carefully and also better timed. The interviews should not up too much time and should be split up in to different places. I could have also filled b-roll with just music.
